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Theme: 12. Wake unto me
Character/s or Pairing: Jayne Cobb/River Tam
Series: Firefly
Rating: G
Notes: I don’t own them. Some light spoilers for ‘War Stories’ and ‘Objects in Space’; takes place shortly after ‘OiS’

 

Twelve Months

River had a bad habit of falling asleep in the strangest places. Every member of the crew had found her sleeping on the catwalks at least once. Kaylee had found the younger girl sleeping under the engine of Serenity more then once. Mal had found River asleep in the extra shuttle twice within the last three months.

He found her sleeping peacefully, all curled up in his covers. Her dark hair was around her face, like wild waves of water. She was laying so still and she looked so small and fragile. Apart of him nearly hated to wake her up. Then, he remembered what Kaylee had said River had done to the guards at Niska’s. ‘Course, that seemed like child’s play when you took in to account the way she dealt with Early; mind games were things Jayne was not fond of.

“Girl?” Jayne made sure to whisper, as the last thing he needed was to scare River. Scaring the girl could lead to all kinds of trouble that Jayne just did not need. “Girl?” He moved closer to his bed and gently kicked it; River did not move. “Girl?!” Just a little louder. This time River just muttered: “No needles.” and she shivered.

River was dreaming of the Academy, that much Jayne could guess. Dreaming and reliving her ordeal, ‘course to River dreams and her reality seemed too be the same thing these days.

“River?!” This time Jayne was hissing at her. He put a hand over her waist and shook her; River’s large chocolate eyes snapped open and she stared straight up into Jayne’s baby blues. “Yer in the wrong bunk.” He explained as he backed away from her.

River sat up and glanced around the room, almost like she wasn’t completely sure where she was. “Not logical.” She muttered quietly. “Serenity, home. There are no two by two here.”

From the corner of his bunk, Jayne watched as River climbed out his bed and began straightening her hair and sundress. The girl did seem a bit confused, but she also seemed more proper then Jayne had ever seen her. It was kind of odd to watch as she fixed herself like all the fancy ladies from the Core.

“There are five Core planets.” River told him as she glanced up with a sweet smile. “Sihnon, Londinum, Bernadette, Osirus, and Ariel.” She paused for only a moment. “They are surrounded by ten Boarder planets. They are called: Boros, Santo, Paquin, Beaumonde, Persephone, Bellerophon, Dyton, Verbena, Hera, and Newhall. We were at Newhall three weeks ago. Our current orbit is near the Rim planet called Silverhold; named so because of the Silver mined there.”

“That’s right.” He narrowed his eyes on hers. “How ya know all that?”

River just shrugged lightly and tapped the side of her head. “Genius.”

Jayne gave her a smile. “Guess ya are. ‘Course ya still ended up in the wrong bunk.” He gave her a teasing-nearly flirting-look. “W’at does that tell ya?”

She gave a little shrug and a light snort. “That I still know more then you.” Again she tapped the side of her head. “Mind reading genius, Jayne.” She gave him another sweet smile. “May not be my bunk, but it will be.” River let out a little laugh that sounded like bells.

Jayne eyed her carefully. “Now hold on one gorram minute…”

River ignored him as she went to the ladder and climbed up. The last thing Jayne heard as the hatch swung shut was River laugher as she yelled down at him. “Mind reading genius, Jayne. Twelve months!”

Date: 2005-11-07 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazywriterchic.livejournal.com
as if he could contradict her!

Date: 2005-11-07 12:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
As if! River is so wearing the pants in their relationship right now. lol.

Date: 2005-11-07 01:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purpleskyfly.livejournal.com
*giggle*

Awwwww, Jayne was semi-flirting!

Date: 2005-11-07 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
:)

Yes, Jayne is starting to try and flirt with River. I'm just not sure how good he would be at it.

Date: 2005-11-07 02:54 am (UTC)
meinterrupted: (firefly - jayne xxx)
From: [personal profile] meinterrupted
Aw, so cute. Love it. I really like this bit: From the corner of his bunk, Jayne watched as River climbed out his bed and began straightening her hair and sundress. The girl did seem a bit confused, but she also seemed more proper then Jayne had ever seen her. It was kind of odd to watch as she fixed herself like all the fancy ladies from the Core.

Date: 2005-11-07 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2005-11-07 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winkingannie.livejournal.com
Aww...she's like Goldilocks!

Date: 2005-11-07 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
So...does that make Jayne a bear? :)

Date: 2005-11-07 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
lol. Oh, the mental picture I have now...lol.

Date: 2005-11-07 09:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calijirl5150.livejournal.com
All shiny :)

Date: 2005-11-07 05:12 pm (UTC)

Date: 2005-11-07 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] realdedanaan.livejournal.com
Heheh,

She so loves to mess with him, doesn't she?

Date: 2005-11-07 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
Yup. Messing with Jayne seems to be River's favorite hobby. :)

Date: 2005-11-07 08:00 pm (UTC)

Date: 2005-11-07 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missmaximus.livejournal.com
I've been reading this series as it has been posted, but today I took the time to read it as one piece and it really made me love it even more.

I thought my favorite phrase was "mind reading genius that could kill them all in their sleep" but "Mind reading genius, Jayne." might win out.

I found that I was slightly disturbed by the idea that Jayne was not the hero of his own story. I'm not exactly sure what that means but it can't be good. I would love you to pick up that thread again someday. The symbolism of blidness was also haunting but cool.

Once again, great job. Well done.

Date: 2005-11-07 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you for this review.

I found that I was slightly disturbed by the idea that Jayne was not the hero of his own story

This will be picked up on later in the series, don't worry. And while I can't yet say if it is a good thing or a bad thing, I will say it might be surprising.

The symbolism of blidness was also haunting but cool.

Thank you!

Date: 2005-11-07 09:15 pm (UTC)
jeshyr: Blessed are the broken. Harry Potter. (Default)
From: [personal profile] jeshyr
I got to the end!

BTW I think that your user info list needs updating.

Have no special bits to quote for you because I couldn't choose... all that specialness :)

Keep writing!

r

Date: 2005-11-07 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
Yes, I need to put this one on my user info lists. Might do that later tonight.

Thanks for the review and I will keep writing.

and the question in jayne's barin was:

Date: 2009-05-27 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjsteamboat76.livejournal.com
how long til she turns 18?

=D this was all sorts of..*gets ready to lose man points* ....cute.

*puts on jayne hat and lifts weights* gotta get man points back....

Re: and the question in jayne's barin was:

Date: 2009-05-31 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkwithheroes.livejournal.com
Not long. She's 18 or older in the other stories I wrote for these two. God, it's been ages since I've written anything in the Firefly fandom. Thanks for reminding me of this story.

Re: and the question in jayne's barin was:

Date: 2009-05-31 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rjsteamboat76.livejournal.com
you're welcome!! i found this via Pretty Deadly. really liked it.

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