I love how simple your prose is, but how affecting it is at the same time. I totally was on the verge of tears the entire time I read this. "A pretty girl is dead." It's such an arresting line, especially from Akira's lips.
I don't think Akira was terribly OC myself, as I found myself able to follow his decision.
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Date: 2007-12-21 08:22 am (UTC)I don't think Akira was terribly OC myself, as I found myself able to follow his decision.