This is so intriguing, it reminds me of a Hill Street Blues type TV script, all interlinking story lines and short fast-moving scenes. I even like the way that a lot of stuff is unresolved, because that seems more realistic. You capture the wider picture, which the central characters would only be a small part of. The D/R reunion scene, though very sad, is well done, because of that very lack of resolution. It would not be simple. And I think the last few lines are great.
There are more and more TW fics coming out now and it seems to me, that of the ones I've read so far, this probably comes closest to the atmosphere of the show.
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Date: 2006-11-27 09:57 am (UTC)There are more and more TW fics coming out now and it seems to me, that of the ones I've read so far, this probably comes closest to the atmosphere of the show.